Very nice. Tim's voice and inner turmoil really come through. There's a great descriptions too like these:
Their gazes parallel like train tracks, two lines of steel or whatever the fuck they make train tracks out of, and you look long enough, seems like they intersect.
and
Tim thinks about darkness and giving birth to something so pure it tears the sky open.
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Date: 2007-02-24 07:31 am (UTC)Their gazes parallel like train tracks, two lines of steel or whatever the fuck they make train tracks out of, and you look long enough, seems like they intersect.
and
Tim thinks about darkness and giving birth to something so pure it tears the sky open.
I hope you write more FNL/SPN fic. :)