I was also going to say "quiet and contemplative". Quiet and powerful. I like this very much, all the details and ...the movement of the blood they share.
One of the reasons I like your style is that you show instead of telling. For instance, the simple exchange about apples says so much more than a whole paragraph describing Dean's feelings. And that in a story of this length, the lines have such weight and you handle it well, you make them count.
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Date: 2007-03-06 03:38 pm (UTC)One of the reasons I like your style is that you show instead of telling. For instance, the simple exchange about apples says so much more than a whole paragraph describing Dean's feelings. And that in a story of this length, the lines have such weight and you handle it well, you make them count.